1. There are 14 sections on the parachute (they’re called cells on the canopy so if I start to say “cells” that’s what I mean). It really should be 9. This turns out to be sort of a big deal for me, the more I think about it. Not sure if the one color is dark blue or purple (I like the color, just not sure what to call it). So I’m going to call it purple just so I can ask if the colors can go Yellow/Green/Purple/Yellow/Purple/Yellow/Purple/Green/Yellow from left to right.
2. Two things on the “joejackson” in the canopy – I don’t really like the font. Is there another similar font? I think it’s the extra things hanging off the j, e, and a. Abby (my daughter) doesn’t think the letters pop out enough against the canopy colors and the white clouds. One idea she had was to remove the orange from the cells of the canopy and make the letters a bright red. Would that work? She wants it to “pop.”
3. The image I sent you has the lines from the canopy to the guy laid out really weird at this shoulders. This is the thing that I should have noticed before I sent it to you. I played around with it just to see if I could make some sense of it. Can you change that to look like the image attached? Only better? ‘Cuz I’m not great at this!
4. I love the box hanging from the umbrella. Never thought of that! Really makes the whole thing a little better because now the guys hands are in the right place, and as you point out, the box will be large enough to make out. Can you make the grey handle on the top of the box a little wider? My thinking is that it will give a better impression that the umbrella handle is under the box handle. Or a darker color? Not sure what would work best.
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